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+ Noto-sama and Yamato + by Serket-XXI

Hello! This is my first critique!

First of all, I really like the overall concept of your artwork- especially with the calming blue sky in the background which also adds a refreshing touch to the picture. What I want to suggest is that you should maybe zoom out of the picture a bit more so the characters featured can be seen a little better. Also, the small black flowers at the bottom (and even maybe the symbol above the guy's head) appear to disturb the artwork. I think leaving them out would have kept the picture more uncluttered and let the beauty of the scene by admired futher than it already is.

In general, I do love this piece with the soft colours that mach perfectly, the reflections of light and the characters' facial expressions. Great work!!! =D
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